Just got feedback from the presentations we did last thursday.
Good
- Fairly well presented
- The opening 2 mins sound good and would certainly intrigue an audience
Bad
- Danger of audience being overloaded in opening, dont need to tell the whole story.
- Didnt seem 100% passionate about your idea. <--- Because I was Nervous!
- Needed to mention audience research sooner.
- Needed to be prompted to reveal more ideas/info.
From this feedback i will definatly have a look back at my idea and tweak little bits to the opening. I think that in my presentation i was quite boring because i was reading off the sheet, thats why they didnt think i was passionate. Also I dont think i was as prepared for the presentation as i could have been, because i only finished it the night before. Also i was the second person in, so i didnt have much time to prepare.
Overall i am quite pleased with how it went, because the main critisisms were just about the presentation, not the actual film.
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