Re-Evaluation

With my opening to 'Exposed' I really want to play with narrative a little more. I like the fact that the opening starts in the middle of the story, but i was thinking of having Julia looking at a picture and then she closes her eyes and flashes back to the memory. Then she closes her eyes and imagines her husband dying. She then flashes back to the day when she found out about her husbands death. i think that this will intrigue the audience more than just it being set in one time. I will stick with the oil rig burning on the TV but i will get someone to speak over it like a news reader.  After having trouble with filming with william, i think i will change the final shot of the opening to a letter falling to the floor. connotating the end of the memory.